Aidan

Wow Aidan you certainly have done a lot of work on your fairytale.

What an interesting fairy tale you have written. I did get a little bit confused because you seem to have repeated yourself about Tia going on the boat. Perhaps you can re-read that part and remove the part you have repeated.

What a neat idea to have treasure on a spooky island. You have described the island well and I can picture the spooky dark island when I am reading your fairy tale.

I look forward to reading what happens to the people from the museum when the pirates set their trap.

Enjoy your day. Mum (cp)