Kaleb Lee

Hi there Kaleb Lee

I liked the beginning of the story where you described the vicious forest and I think I can almost see a spooky forest but I'm not sure why the forest is vicious yet. I'm wondering why the mean little girl is chopping the trees down - is she wanting to sell the trees? Does she want to destroy the forest and the environment? Will she try and chop down the spooky forest? Have you got a hero that is going to save the forest, the birds and the animals?

Lots of questions I know but I am looking forward to seeing how your story is going to develop.