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Please give children suggestions about what they might be able to add to make the setting more interesting or easy to visualise.The children would appreciate it if you could be quite specific, so that they can reflect on your suggestions.The more feedback the students get the easier it will be for them to make changes in their work.
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How can you help with their writing?
We are focusing on writing a descriptive setting.
read it and try to visualise the setting.
Comments: Give a positive commentMake a suggestion
"I like the way you have described the ..., I can see ..""Could you explain a bit more about ..." Or " I'd like to see, feel or hear more about what the setting (be specific)
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