Vanessa

Wow what a great story this is turning into. I would really like to know what the wicked witch will get up to. I wonder how Tia got to be with the witch when Tia is so good and the witch is so mean. Will you be telling us whether the twins are boys or girls and what their names are?
You have used some fantastic descriptions, I can picture the Kingdom and the water and rocks and the witches house sounds scary. I wonder what will happen next?