Aidan

Hi Aidan

I am beginning to see what your story is about. It sounds a bit like The Pirates of the Caribbean. I was wondering why and how the Wicked Witch made the boat that Tia was on not go to the island. Was the Witch trying to protect that boat or was she one of the pirates watching over the treasure waiting for the rest of the pirates.
I am looking forward to seeing how you explain it a bit more. You have me hooked.