Haley

Hi Haley

I liked the way you have now described your underwater sea castle. I can also picture Melisha's lovely room and am wondering if this is an important part to the story.
I love the sound of the rainbow shark and rainbow fish. It must be a very colourful place to be around. I am wondering if the colours in the water are going to become a problem in your story or are they part of some amazing solution.
I look forward to more of your story online soon.