Royce

Hi Royce

I liked the beginning of your story where you described how Tia wanted 4 legs and asked the witch to help her and also how Tia would have to give up her voice to have the four legs.
I'm not sure why you have introduced the cow - is the cow the reason Tia wants four legs?
Why does the other cow need to marry the other cow? I'm a bit confused about this bit.
Also why would the witch want to throw rocks at Tia.

Perhaps in your next piece of work you have already thought of the reasons so I look forward to reading the next part of your story.