Starsha

Hi Starsha

I like the beginning of your story. I can picture a lot of the characters and what they are doing. I am a bit confused though about the evil stepmother and how the unicorns knew she was trying to get their beauty and what she was going to do to steal it. Also how did the guards know what to do to kill the evil stepmother?
I am looking forward to reading how you are going to solve these problems.