Hana

Wow Hana

You have written a very interesting and descriptive story. I was wondering what the connections was with the sea queen and Rosalia the evil Sea Emporess so I liked the way you have explained that further in your story well done.
I am getting a little bit confused about the big bad octopus and if he will come back into the story as a main evil character or a good one because you have used him as part of your story title. He was also a good character I think so I'm not sure why he is called the big bad octopus.